MY NEIGHBORHOOD
My neighborhood has lots of nice people. They always greet everyone they pass. They hang out outside their friend’s house with their radio blasting music all day. Sometimes their music is as loud as a police car’s siren rushing towards the scene of the crime. Even though they smoke and drink as much as they do they are still very nice people.
There are a lot of things to do around my neighborhood. You could visit the community garden, there are a lot of beautiful flower. You could get some food down the street at Mcdonalds. If you’re trying to get on a diet, you could go to the park across the corner, there is a slide, see-saw, and two cool swings. There is also a corner store just across the street from my house it sells all sorts of items from A-Z. If you are ever out at night and you stand on the top of the hill you could see the beautiful lights of the city and the golden gate bridge it is as beautiful as an angel straight out of heaven.
The weather is always a mystery. You never know when it’s going to rain or cover the ground with bright rays of sunlight. When it rains the floor looks so beautiful at night because it illuminates the whole neighborhood like light bulb. When the rain stops it is usually sunny afterwards. I think the weather is the best part of living in that neighborhood because of its unusual weather. The rain in that neighborhood is the thing that makes living there more gratifying.
My neighborhood has lots of nice people. They always greet everyone they pass. They hang out outside their friend’s house with their radio blasting music all day. Sometimes their music is as loud as a police car’s siren rushing towards the scene of the crime. Even though they smoke and drink as much as they do they are still very nice people.
There are a lot of things to do around my neighborhood. You could visit the community garden, there are a lot of beautiful flower. You could get some food down the street at Mcdonalds. If you’re trying to get on a diet, you could go to the park across the corner, there is a slide, see-saw, and two cool swings. There is also a corner store just across the street from my house it sells all sorts of items from A-Z. If you are ever out at night and you stand on the top of the hill you could see the beautiful lights of the city and the golden gate bridge it is as beautiful as an angel straight out of heaven.
The weather is always a mystery. You never know when it’s going to rain or cover the ground with bright rays of sunlight. When it rains the floor looks so beautiful at night because it illuminates the whole neighborhood like light bulb. When the rain stops it is usually sunny afterwards. I think the weather is the best part of living in that neighborhood because of its unusual weather. The rain in that neighborhood is the thing that makes living there more gratifying.
I really liked reading about the similes you had. They were really amazing. I liked most of your words in your paragraph like " illuminating ". (: I think that you should check your grammar though, but other than that I really liked reading your blog .
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ReplyDeleteRyann ! I totally liked your blog ! (:
ReplyDelete&besides I would've gave you 100, really . If you finished it before I wrote on that paper. Total A+ ! :D
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ReplyDeleteHey nice blog Ryan.It was really good
ReplyDeletewow! so many trees that looks like coconut trees. is that coconut up there? i want one.
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Ryan Ryan Ryan! OMG I like your layout, it's so green. You live in the same neighborhood as Christine. You guys alomost have the same picture. I suggest you to take the picture in a different angle, but it looks good at this angle too.
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